Kia ora All,
I've told the students that for homework they should read their descriptive piece about their Monday Morning to you. This term we're focussing on recrafting our writing to add more impact and 'showing' what is happening using language that enables us to build a picture in our mind.
Ask your child to read you their work so far and give them some feedback.
Rock On,
Mr M
Thanks, the Monday morning described in our house was a laugh!
ReplyDeleteThere were some pretty humorous ones all right!
DeleteHi my Name is Chase from Waikowhai Primary. I like your blog because you have added some much detail to it. If you would like to check out my blog go to my blog http://wpschasen.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi Chase, thanks for the comment. I like how you looked at my blog and wrote something related to it. Next time, to make your comment even better, try clicking on one of the student blogs (down the left hand side) and viewing a piece of work produced by a student in Ruma Ono. They would really appreciate your thoughtful feedback.
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